This is my first version of my P1 proposal before receiving feedback from my teacher. The feedback I received from my teacher was that my idea was very solid however to improve I need to take a look and expand on my ideas and add more detail, and that it was essential that I decide upon my narrative element.
Improved P1 Proposal -
This is the improved version of my P1 Proposal after listening to my teachers feedback and then acting on it to improve my proposal to the best of my ability, and have added more detail and finalised on a narrative element.
Presentation of Proposal -
This is my live presentation of my proposal to my teacher, going through my powerpoint and explaining more details about my music video.
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